Something is Wrong Here

[AsphyxZero]

http://soundcloud.com/asphyxzero/something-is-wrong-here

I don't feel like saying anything so copy paste
I downloaded a granular synthesis VST, aiming to make some kind of autechre inspired stuff. Needless to say, I went a totally different direction. That lead sounding thing? That's actually the kick drum. 16th notes at 700 bpm. Hehehe.

[Coolboyrulez0]

one of your better works again 8)

maybe work on an introduction that turns into the beginning part you have there. seems slightly too sudden to me.

Then at the breakdown at 0:44 / 1:06 perhaps add a slowed amen sample and mess around with that (cut/slice/reverse/dblue). ending also needs to be extended.

Overall, the main critique I can give is the length, I wanna hear more of this goodness.

[sakura080789]

wow i must say i love this i wish it were longer though but i love it none the less

[midnghtraver]

The pad introduced at 1:06 sounds too preset-y to me.

[wargasm1]

The intro is repetitive a bit, no?